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Amonsri

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PostSubject: The Twins of Old   Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:46 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Old   Sun Feb 17, 2013 3:12 pm

Chapter 1 needs to be cut in more paragraphs. Aside from that, I think it's quite good, I liked it Wink

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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Old   Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:10 pm

Yeah, that's probably a good idea, Amon.
Glad its getting good publicity, though ^^

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